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4 A.M.
Contributed by
randyjohnson
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Friday, 23rd February 2007 @ 07:37:06 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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It's 4 A.M. and I haven't had any sleep all night.
My wife and I had a big fight.
She slapped me and I slapped her back.
She got her suitcases and started to pack.
She went to stay with her mother.
I want her back because I still love her.
We said stuff to each other that was pretty mean.
But if she comes back, I'll treat her like a queen.
She's beautiful and she's stacked.
She's one classy lady and that's a fact.
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randyjohnson
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2007-02-23 07:37:06]
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Re: 4 A.M.
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by Malcolmsdreamgirl on
Friday, 23rd February 2007 @ 07:51:50 AM AEST
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Short n sweet -
Trust me .. when a man "LOVES" a woman he does not slap her .... and a "CLASS" lady doesn't fight or attack her husband....
Nice write tho ...
Id give him a week before they're at it again lol
Dee xx |
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Re: 4 A.M.
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by Pain on
Friday, 23rd February 2007 @ 10:24:18 AM AEST
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Thats a nice but funny poem
i dont know if you were meaning to be funny but it was. |
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Re: 4 A.M.
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by one11 on
Friday, 23rd February 2007 @ 10:33:51 AM AEST
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| your poems have great visualization, if only you can channel that flow into your own emotional story then it would be much more profound. keep up the good work. |
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Re: 4 A.M.
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by poet_in_waiting on
Friday, 23rd February 2007 @ 01:36:14 PM AEST
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c'mon ... am i not the only one who found sthis funny ..
She's stacked !! hahaha
i think this is a great satire of a sad human condition .. good stuff |
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