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Sixteen and Dying
Contributed by
Pebbles345
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Thursday, 22nd February 2007 @ 08:56:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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I am sixteen and dying.
My blood is tainted with disease.
My heart and soul are deteriorating,
For my pain there is no peace.
The hands of time are ticking
On my eternal clock.
My ship is slowly sailing
Away from this earthly dock.
It is hard to keep on breathing
For I would like some rest.
Then I hear that halting beat
In the hallways of my chest.
Copyright ©
Pebbles345
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2007-02-22 20:56:58]
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Re: Sixteen and Dying
(User Rating: 1 )
by Malcolmsdreamgirl on
Friday, 23rd February 2007 @ 02:48:59 AM AEST
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Pebbles that was so sad .....
upsetting even .............. but so beautifully written ....
Keep penning
Dee xx |
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Re: Sixteen and Dying
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by SilverRain on
Thursday, 17th April 2008 @ 06:22:37 PM AEST
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| wow....awesome!!!! |
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