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~Vampires Visit~
Contributed by
misfitme
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Thursday, 22nd February 2007 @ 07:16:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Alas, within the chill realm of unending night~
those who dwell on foot as well as in flight
Are the ancient creatures without mortal vibration~
ravishers of the soul with dark sensation...
They seduce with the power to deny death~
a promise made to the bare flesh caressed by their breath
Thus, should you awaken with fevered pulse late one night~
doubt not the bloods prophecy of their coming bite...
To be continued...
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misfitme
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2007-02-22 19:16:38]
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Re: ~Vampires Visit~
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by FRANCO on
Thursday, 22nd February 2007 @ 11:08:33 PM AEST
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good write ...and Excited to know next part.
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Re: ~Vampires Visit~
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by Vampirequeen on
Friday, 23rd February 2007 @ 01:31:06 AM AEST
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very nicely done indeed.
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Re: ~Vampires Visit~
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by myheartsvoice on
Friday, 23rd February 2007 @ 06:16:13 PM AEST
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This is a masterpeice of macarbre.
They seduce with the power to deny death~
awesome thought oh if only. lovely as always
Ben
the artist formerly known as myheartsvoice
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Re: ~Vampires Visit~
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by shelby on
Saturday, 24th February 2007 @ 01:24:56 AM AEST
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I have been away and am taking a few moments to do some catching up and boy am I glad that I did! YOu have a talent for this you did an incredible job stepping on the dark side of the vampire I loved it
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Re: ~Vampires Visit~
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by yangdantien on
Saturday, 24th February 2007 @ 12:41:57 PM AEST
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This rings true to an inscription with rich calligraphy on a seal of an ancient book bound in unique leathers trimmed with silver embroidery on the edges. The seal is opened and the book awaits further voice so the reader can also sink their teeth.
Darkly Delightful
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