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Leave me, take me, love me, break me.& i will always be in love with you.
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xDiSaStErPiEcEx
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Thursday, 22nd February 2007 @ 05:42:27 PM in AEST
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i want to cut so ******* bad.
and you question my love. thanks.
all this is for you. nothing huh?
i cry as my heart breaks.
you mean so much to me.
and the reality that we're going to end.
makes me wonder if i'll make it.
what it'll take for me to mend.
i hate this feeling, of loneliness and pain.
and you're sad, i want to help, but you won't talk.
and so i get off the phone, throw the phone, and cry.
my knees shake as if i can't walk.
and i don't want you to hurt, never think i do.
but baby i can't help, but i still try, cause your worth it.
and maybe i don't try hard enough? for this i am sorry.
would it be so bad if i tried to be perfect?
i just want you to love me, always.
i would give up everything for you, cause i have fallen, in love.
can't you give me a hint to whats wrong?
no. you never do. maybe you just need a shove?
no, you don't. this angers you, & again i'm sorry.
nope not that, more anger, and now i'm crying.
i can't help but to prepare for this heart-ache,
and to feel as though we're dying.
but then days come by like perfectness & happy life.
as though this could never end. ever.
but days like this come back to me, and hurt worse.
so i guess i should not say never.
but i can't help it if your love has got me so high off your smell.
and i feel oblivious to the reality floating around me.
and then this depression floods over me, pulls me under.
i feel as though you should've never found me.
like i just caused you pain. pain not worth it.
and i just want this feeling to go away, disappear.
you leaving me, not me being alone, just being without you.
that in itself is my greatest fear.
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2007-02-22 17:42:27]
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Re: Leave me, take me, love me, break me.& i will always be in love with you.
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by deathdrop on
Thursday, 22nd February 2007 @ 06:42:46 PM AEST
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this is a very deeply powerful poem. i can't tell it's writen from your heart.
stay strong, i felt like this when my ex went back to prison... but i'm over him now and still moving onwards and upwards and i'm sure that you can move on too...! |
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Re: Leave me, take me, love me, break me.& i will always be in love with you.
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by PhantomVampyress on
Friday, 23rd February 2007 @ 09:26:01 AM AEST
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this is powerful.. but if you have to change yourself for someone to love you more then they don't love you. if you are crying all the time and they are hurting you alot they don't care that much about you.. this is a heartfelt write though.. but seriously you can do better if they treat you like that ..
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