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wish to dream
Contributed by
one11
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Thursday, 22nd February 2007 @ 03:31:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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I see disgrace opon each face,
I see first place but won't win a race.
I see you'll love but it's me you shove,
I see above nothing thereof
Grim is what it may seem
but now I wish to dream.
It seems forever more we are off to war.
It seems I can't ignore this painful sore.
It seems I have a friend but see now it's pretend,
It seems it's at an end but it can all transcend.
Nothing could be as extreme
as what you may wish to dream.
I feel wieghtless, floating I guess,
I feel there's progress. Where is the stress?
I feel like jumping, and exploring I'm realizing.
I feel like singing, laughing, and shouting...
Snap back now to hear my scream,
Awake
I realize
I wish to dream.
Copyright ©
one11
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2007-02-22 15:31:46]
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Re: wish to dream
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by Rhei76 on
Thursday, 22nd February 2007 @ 03:55:07 PM AEST
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| creative, nice write. |
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Re: wish to dream
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by myheartsvoice on
Thursday, 22nd February 2007 @ 06:44:16 PM AEST
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A nice peice of work, your own style, a forward
approach, it says what need's to be said in a
clear and concise manner. Well done.
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Re: wish to dream
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by FRANCO on
Thursday, 22nd February 2007 @ 10:45:52 PM AEST
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Wonderful write, I like the creativity in your poem.
I wish to dream too...
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