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Thank You for the Change of Heart
Contributed by
needledancing
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Thursday, 22nd February 2007 @ 11:45:47 AM in AEST
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DreamsandWishes
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Record the journey of the heart,
A flight each soul must thus depart.
We池e battered, torn and used for lust.
The journey still a soul filled must.
The pains, the bliss, the travels end.
Oh be it that we find a friend.
Understanding, appreciating all we are inside.
Take it all and savor me and leave me with my pride.
I値l risk the most vulnerable of this tender soul.
I値l be the subject of despair when you leave me less than whole.
Endless nights I値l wonder why I wasn稚 what you needed.
I値l look to strength you gave to me and flourish what was seeded.
I値l realize my truth through you, although I feel despise.
I値l phoenix from this tattered prison and gain another prize.
A wisdom that you taught me well although we ended changed.
The who I was and should have been are now all re-arranged.
I知 reborn to love again and I bless you for my pain.
Copyright ﾂｩ
needledancing
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2007-02-22 11:45:47]
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Re: Thank You for the Change of Heart
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by Dom on
Thursday, 22nd February 2007 @ 01:24:24 PM AEST
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Oh I just loved this poem, its straight from your heart. I particularly like the line 'I'll phoenix from this tattered prison and gain another prize', its an apt description for such as life changing experience.
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Re: Thank You for the Change of Heart
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by PhantomVampyress on
Thursday, 22nd February 2007 @ 01:27:19 PM AEST
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and excellent penned write this is!!! beautiful job.. we all can relate to this and you worded this so eloquently.. very inspiring and hopeful piece.. this made my day reading it.. beautiful job..
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Re: Thank You for the Change of Heart
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by myheartsvoice on
Thursday, 22nd February 2007 @ 01:31:03 PM AEST
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What a fine peice of literature this is. You have a most eliquent style. Love? eh, lol.
it'll always have it's way with our fragile heart.
As long as we crave for it, some unforseen force shall accomendate that need, wheather it come's to visit or actualy take up permanent residence in our life is another story. Lovely poem.
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Re: Thank You for the Change of Heart
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by Rhei76 on
Thursday, 22nd February 2007 @ 02:10:40 PM AEST
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Strong staement, nicely intepret.
Life goes on and nobody should be or feel alone. |
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Re: Thank You for the Change of Heart
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by BOZEEN on
Thursday, 22nd February 2007 @ 07:34:50 PM AEST
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GOOD WRITING KEEP UP THE PEN.
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Re: Thank You for the Change of Heart
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by AirHead on
Wednesday, 7th March 2007 @ 03:47:24 PM AEST
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| Good write, hope I one day too am reborn... |
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