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When I'm Gone
Contributed by
DesolantDreamer
on
Thursday, 22nd February 2007 @ 09:19:35 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I don't wanna be
Just another statistic
I don't wanna be
Just another forgotten death
I want to be remembered
Influencing and Moving
Those people I've never met
I want to be remembered
I wan't to die in a way that
Will cause those that have never seen me
To tear up and feel
I want to be remembered
By those that don't know me
I just want to be remembered
When I'm Gone
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2007-02-22 09:19:35]
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Re: When I'm Gone
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by PhantomVampyress on
Thursday, 22nd February 2007 @ 09:21:40 AM AEST
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this is a very powerful piece.. I think everyone wants to be remembered. and this is a creative write about that.. I hope your not planning to go away anytime soon.. but everyone will live on in the hearts of loved ones when they pass so that is a good thing.. this is a very expressive creative piece great job
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Re: When I'm Gone
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by justagirl82 on
Thursday, 22nd February 2007 @ 12:50:12 PM AEST
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| This is an amazingly insightful piece of writing. It's obvious but in a way that people think these thoughts but aren't always willing to say them out loud. I know I want to be remembered in all these ways and even more. I greatly enjoyed this read. Thank You. |
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Re: When I'm Gone
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by Rhei76 on
Thursday, 22nd February 2007 @ 02:41:14 PM AEST
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| strong and proud keep it up and you will sure find what you seek |
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