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What is Your Name
Contributed by
whispers_2_your_ear
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Wednesday, 21st February 2007 @ 10:04:12 PM in AEST
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Tap tap tap on the tree and the night song of a whippoorwill,
life moves forward even when time stands still.
The sunlight shines off morning dew as the tear of her eye,
there is a soft glow in the moonlight that makes her hair shine.
Despair, heartache, and sorrow have come to call her name,
her flower overshadowed by the torment of shame.
Now hands tremble, the heart quickens as her chest rise,
aware she has allowed another a forbidden look inside.
Emotions long lost begin to re-flame and burn bright,
the day brings meaning and passion consumes her night.
The wind although silent seems to whisper her name,
a gentle glance has shown her from were the wind came.
There is peace, a comfort, a safe pleasure in the calm,
she has found her way and will remain forever in my arms.
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Re: What is Your Name
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by MickeyPigKnuckles on
Wednesday, 21st February 2007 @ 11:29:54 PM AEST
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whispers_2_your_ear, this is an excellent composure and one that gently touches your readers hearts. Thank you for sharing this piece with us all and for giving us a small part of yourself. Wonderful Poem.
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Re: What is Your Name
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by Malcolmsdreamgirl on
Thursday, 22nd February 2007 @ 07:49:27 AM AEST
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this poem made me feel warm inside
and such joy at such a romantic loving ending
I liked very much
Dee xx |
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Re: What is Your Name
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by Postcard_From_Heaven on
Thursday, 22nd February 2007 @ 11:04:06 AM AEST
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Oh my gosh.....!!
I likt that feel so much is special of words purfume natural from you is is........! Ahhh.
That is why guy have to write poems very sweet romantic chaming..
l'm 1girl also surrender of your whisper if the words solf touch behind my ears...So !
Lucky of your GF she have special belong and touch it already....is You.
just your whisper can make around space
long day long night with some 1 can't forget it........!!
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Re: What is Your Name
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by Postcard_From_Heaven on
Thursday, 22nd February 2007 @ 04:45:56 PM AEST
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Humm.. so while i will come to say Hi..
Friend welcome.. Smile,happy have on your.
wish my friend... SMILE..
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Re: What is Your Name
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by FRANCO on
Thursday, 22nd February 2007 @ 11:02:26 PM AEST
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A beautiful soft and tender romantic poem, felt good to read. you sure have the gift of writing in you.
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