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In his eyes
Contributed by
Loriann
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Wednesday, 21st February 2007 @ 08:45:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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In his eyes I see love.
Like endless pools like the stars above.
His heart so full with much to share.
A love so great and with so much care.
He touched my heart with words so true.
His voice can calm me and I am never blue.
A gentle smile a touch a feel.
A love for him that can be so real.
Open your heart to me my love.
Like god opens his gates to all above.
Copyright ©
Loriann
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2007-02-21 20:45:50] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: In his eyes
(User Rating: 1 ) by MickeyPigKnuckles on
Wednesday, 21st February 2007 @ 09:32:07 PM AEST (User
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Loriann, Oh wow I really admire you and your talent as you know what your heart wants and thats a great thing. Thank you so much for sharing.
Your Dear Friend
Mickey Pig Knuckles
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Re: In his eyes
(User Rating: 1 ) by Malcolmsdreamgirl on
Thursday, 22nd February 2007 @ 02:40:24 AM AEST (User
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How wonderful to read TRUE LOVE and happiness ....
THIS is how it should feel FOREVERMORE
lovely write
Dee xx |
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Re: In his eyes
(User Rating: 1 ) by PhantomVampyress on
Thursday, 22nd February 2007 @ 08:58:24 AM AEST (User
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this is a very pleasent thing to read in the morning!! glad i came across this piece.. it was very well written and gives you a good feeling.. great job in expressing your love
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Re: In his eyes
(User Rating: 1 ) by wizard on
Thursday, 22nd February 2007 @ 05:35:06 PM AEST (User
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i was beginning to think you only wrote sad poems..lol...this was very nice,
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Re: In his eyes
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Monday, 5th March 2007 @ 07:36:03 PM AEST (User
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Aww Such a sweet, sweet poem. Isn't it wonderful being in love : ) |
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Re: In his eyes
(User Rating: 1 ) by AirHead on
Saturday, 17th March 2007 @ 03:32:21 PM AEST (User
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You are so talented, I could read your poems for hours |
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