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Release
Contributed by
precious123
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Wednesday, 21st February 2007 @ 06:11:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
hbadday
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Disappointed self-referential bull*****,
Once clearly not enough:
struck down each and every time.
There’s only so many…
He doesn’t feel sad.
There’s something inside him that almost prevents it.
Like a knot
deep in the pit of me.
Not sure what it is, but it’s that which hurts.
Less a pain to be feigned,
more a dull ache.
And he feels like he should be,
but not because he is
but because he should be.
I don’t think I am.
I may be quite relieved, actually.
Awkward for a while but eventually forgotten.
Is freedom an acquired taste?
But we’re not doing it again:
he can come to me,
he will have to, won’t he?
Because I cannot find him.
He cannot find me.
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precious123
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2007-02-21 18:11:14]
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Re: Release
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by FRANCO on
Wednesday, 21st February 2007 @ 06:21:26 PM AEST
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I can very well understand you mood; this is one such point in time where very one on earth will have to face feel the pinch of it.
Very good write though.
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Re: Release
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by PhantomVampyress on
Wednesday, 21st February 2007 @ 07:52:08 PM AEST
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a very expressive piece this is.. hope your day got better.. I liked the expressiveness in this
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