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What becomes of the broken hearted
Contributed by
Malcolmsdreamgirl
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Wednesday, 21st February 2007 @ 03:02:00 PM in AEST
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I read your words of pain and grief,.... eating you away
The love you lost, the life you gave, until they left that day
Now you think of only pain inside, as it rips, your heart in two
Forgetting times, declaring love between the both of you
I wonder why you feel inside, your life will now soon end
without this "OTHER" love around, for you to now on depend?
That empty bed, with just you in, that house so empty too
That dinner table set for one, instead of BOTH of you!
You reach out from your heart to find, or hold, their hand again
Yet when they walked out from your life, you should have realised then
Your love wasn't meant to be,.... Forever and a day.........................
For if the fates had written so, beside you now they'd lay
Be thankful for your great escape, pity their next victim
For many more broken hearts they'll leave, with not a soul to fix them
You were so lucky to walk away with just a broken heart
But TRUE LOVE lasts forever more, and NEVER TRUE LOVE parts.
Go find that "SPECIAL SOMEONE" that waits for you to call
And slowly adore that feeling of love as once more in love you fall
Enjoy each butterfly you feel,each rollercoasting minute
With someone new worth loving now, someone PERFECT IN IT.
Copyright ©
Malcolmsdreamgirl
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2007-02-21 15:02:00]
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Re: What becomes of the broken hearted
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by MisfitMe on
Wednesday, 21st February 2007 @ 03:20:26 PM AEST
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Sooo reminiscent of this oldie but goodie...
"What becomes of the broken hearted
Who've had love that's now departed...
I know, I've got to find~
Some kind of peace of mind..."
Great job!
BigLoveMuchPeace,
~Misfitme
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Re: What becomes of the broken hearted
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by MickeyPigKnuckles on
Wednesday, 21st February 2007 @ 03:33:46 PM AEST
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Malcolmsdreamgirl, You always amaze me with your wonderful warm heart packed full of loving warmness to care for and comfort those feeling sad. You are so precious and I am glad I have not only a fellwo poet but a Dear Friend like you. Thank you for being there for all of us and for sharing your warm love. This poem was superbly composed by a really great author.
Thank You Always for being my friend and for the awesome warm comments you leave me.
Your Dear Friend
Mickey Pig Knuckles
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Re: What becomes of the broken hearted
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by Grownbabygirl on
Wednesday, 21st February 2007 @ 07:57:03 PM AEST
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| Very nice, something that i needed to hear. |
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Re: What becomes of the broken hearted
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by Loriann on
Thursday, 22nd February 2007 @ 01:21:48 PM AEST
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wow this was truely a very powerful poem. It reached out right there and hit the nail right on the head. I was very pleased to be able to read this . Great job.
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