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This Life, I can't take it
Contributed by
Tahany
on
Monday, 24th February 2003 @ 06:40:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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This life,
I want out of this life,
I can't take it.
The lies and empty promises,
I can't take it.
This life,
Why am I here?
For god to play cruel games?
I can't take it.
Why am I here?
For everyone to have someone
to make fun of and call names?
I can't take it.
This life,
My family in its harsh ways,
Doesn't understand why I'm feeling this way.
I can't take it .
Why can't I tell them?
Why must I hide it?
I can't take it.
This life,
I've gone these last two years;
pretending I'm happy but,
I can't take it.
It's time to show how I feel
and let my emotions fly,
I CAN'T TAKE IT!
Copyright ©
Tahany
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2003-02-24 06:40:00]
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Re: This Life, I can't take it
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by blain on
Monday, 24th February 2003 @ 09:54:45 AM AEST
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| yeah man... life sux, but hang in there... there's still a lot more u have to experience before u die... |
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Re: This Life, I can't take it
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by LOWMAN613 on
Monday, 24th February 2003 @ 01:49:44 PM AEST
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| God I'm sure has a special plan for you,Hang in there I know things look bad now but in time they will get better! Christina |
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Re: This Life, I can't take it
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by kegs04 on
Monday, 24th February 2003 @ 07:07:46 PM AEST
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whoa.
i loved it. That is exactly how i have been feeling these last few months, put on a face so my family doesnt notice.. I think i am still feeling this way, but i think i am starting to convince myself that there is nothing wrong.. prolly not exactly healthy, but it keeps me going.
Great write, hit home for me.. thanx
~kegs
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Re: This Life, I can't take it
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by bobotheclown on
Tuesday, 25th February 2003 @ 05:43:11 PM AEST
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I can relate to this a lot. It is beautiful in its simplicity keep on writing and hang in there.
Bobo (Joel) |
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