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Like A Pedal On A Rose
Contributed by
myheartsvoice
on
Wednesday, 21st February 2007 @ 02:01:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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In
my life
your everything
that's beautiful to
me,
a
miracle
especially made
for myne eyes to
see.
And
oh so much
there is to view
so where do i begin?,
your eyes reflecting love
so true coming from
within.
Your
lips so
sweet and
gentle so cute
your little nose,
a heart so warm
and tender like
a pedal on a
rose.
A
kiss
i'd save
for you in
spring that
time when
all was
new,
in
other
words
my everything
i'd commit to
you.
In
my life your
everything i love
and i adore, were
i to live my life again
my heart you'd have once
more.
myheartsvoice
Copyright ©
myheartsvoice
... [
2007-02-21 14:01:02]
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Re: Like A Pedal On A Rose
(User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on
Wednesday, 21st February 2007 @ 02:37:27 PM AEST
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absolutely stunning.. I love the flow and the wording.. the ending is so enchanting.. such an equiste masterpiece of love.. well written
vampyress Jenni |
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Re: Like A Pedal On A Rose
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by poet_in_waiting on
Wednesday, 21st February 2007 @ 03:00:44 PM AEST
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Thanks so much for this .. it's the love poem i've always wanted to write ...
but i have a head ache !!
well done excellent !! |
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Re: Like A Pedal On A Rose
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by MisfitMe on
Wednesday, 21st February 2007 @ 03:44:25 PM AEST
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Thank you, once again...for sharing the celebration of your love w/ us! You exhilarate the vibrational content of the universe w/ your words of love... which in turn smiles on us all. Making, " thank you " the most appropriate of comments, I could make here *wink*
A Feel Good Write w/o a Doubt!
BigLove~Me |
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