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Unreached heights
Contributed by
guiltycircles
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Tuesday, 20th February 2007 @ 10:56:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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a place where love exists...
sounds like the corny song of hope
what will you wish for when the end does come
they pump you full of words directing where you are supposed to be
do they control the motions of your heart
or do you take charge?
will you ever feel those unreached heights that lay beyond your touch?
but are they your heights at all?
what is it that you aspire to, is all they ever ask,
i ask you, is aspiration the height you seek?
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Re: Unreached heights
(User Rating: 1 ) by MickeyPigKnuckles on
Wednesday, 21st February 2007 @ 10:28:01 AM AEST (User
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guiltycircles, Interesting composure here and very well done I might add. No getting lost in your words of art as to me the message is very clear and I would venture to say that many others will also clearly see. Thank you for giving us all a little of yourself and your wonderful art of poetry.
Mickey Pig Knuckles
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