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5 Fold
Contributed by
rhei76
on
Tuesday, 20th February 2007 @ 06:17:56 PM in AEST
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My evidence is little
My expeirence unknown
The world is a creature
& memories are it's bones
I walked a mile in the sun
To the West, late afternoon
Watched the sky and trees
Listen to their tones
Atleast I think I thought,
I heard them speak
Where energy is one
& one is all
& all is gone
Where gone has...
My evolution is strong
Changes are aboard
The moon eclipsed mind
& shallow indention
will turn the spicket
& feed upon the wicked
Lost love, soul
All things heavenly in control
Spice, herbs
Bud
Maybe some one like me,
Deserves
Copyright ©
rhei76
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2007-02-20 18:17:56]
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Re: 5 Fold
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by PhantomVampyress on
Tuesday, 20th February 2007 @ 06:21:07 PM AEST
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a very great imagery and very creative.. well penned.. awesome write
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Re: 5 Fold
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by myheartsvoice on
Tuesday, 20th February 2007 @ 11:03:43 PM AEST
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This line especially > " I walked a mile in the sun To the West, late afternoon" i loved it. Talk about a flash back. Great writting and pleasantly vivid. You have a good style.
myheartsvoice
Thank you also for the comment.
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Re: 5 Fold
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by MickeyPigKnuckles on
Tuesday, 20th February 2007 @ 11:26:04 PM AEST
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rhei76, wow what an awesome poem as the journey begins by such a fine author with great ability. The message was great and the composure is perfect. Once again, its so nice to share this brief moment of time with you as its my honor to be amongst your greatness. Thank you so much for feeding our appetite for more of you and your awesome poetic writing.
Your Dear Friend
Mickey Pig Knuckles
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Re: 5 Fold
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 21st February 2007 @ 04:47:12 AM AEST
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I totally enjoyed reading this. I love how it comes across to your reader. Through the magic of your pen you have managed to deliver a spectacular write. Well done.
warm hugs,
sue m |
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Re: 5 Fold
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by needledancing on
Wednesday, 21st February 2007 @ 11:16:57 AM AEST
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| Another well done piece...I love that last line. |
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