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Song of the willow tree
Contributed by
goodandevil
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Monday, 19th February 2007 @ 11:27:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Like the song of the willow tree
Hanging in its pain
My heart’s beat off-key
Is drowning in the rain
Silent, the somber melody
Fills the cool night air
Echoes of would be
Without a rest to spare
Love is a songbooks potpourri
Planted in the earth
Encore is the willow tree
Dare to see its worth
Copyright ©
goodandevil
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2007-02-19 23:27:13]
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Re: Song of the willow tree
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by MisfitMe on
Tuesday, 20th February 2007 @ 12:48:16 AM AEST
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Wow, you completely captured me in this one, but, ah, what a willing captive I am!
Exquisite!!!
BigLoveMuchPeace,
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Re: Song of the willow tree
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Tuesday, 20th February 2007 @ 02:50:18 AM AEST
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incredible.
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Re: Song of the willow tree
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by FRANCO on
Tuesday, 20th February 2007 @ 07:00:28 AM AEST
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Friend you certainly do have a way with the words.
Good write.
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Re: Song of the willow tree
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by Dom on
Tuesday, 20th February 2007 @ 08:04:32 AM AEST
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I love the clarity of the images in this and the melancholic tone. The last stanza is a gem.
Dom |
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Re: Song of the willow tree
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by Kristina_Simpson_Stewart on
Wednesday, 28th February 2007 @ 11:06:19 AM AEST
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Beautifully written
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