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Decorate My World
Contributed by
needledancing
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Monday, 19th February 2007 @ 11:11:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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When I was just a little girl I thought I was so strange,
in every room I travelled I would mentally re-arrange.
I would add pieces of furniture to make the room look right,
Change the colours, Paint the walls, and put things out of sight.
I just had something in me that wanted things placed so,
the rooms I often entered had so much that didn’t go,
I never said a word to those who put there rooms as such,
I guess I just concluded they didn’t have “The Touch”
It continued through my lifetime from room to room I’d travelled,
Changing mentally every room until my mind unraveled.
I finally had to stop this crazy passion of décor,
I found some rooms just filled with LOVE and couldn’t say no more.
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needledancing
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2007-02-19 23:11:13]
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Re: Decorate My World
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by iodinelove on
Monday, 19th February 2007 @ 11:20:55 PM AEST
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| you are kinda strange |
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Re: Decorate My World
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by MickeyPigKnuckles on
Tuesday, 20th February 2007 @ 12:43:23 AM AEST
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needledancing, there is nothing wrong with you and I am sorry through comments others have to be so mean as there is nothing wrong with being so creative. I liked this poem and see such an awesome talent that I will always encourage and hopefully even inspire to always write. You are awesome and admired as a fellow poet. Wonderful Poem.
Your Dear Friend
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Re: Decorate My World
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by FRANCO on
Tuesday, 20th February 2007 @ 01:03:41 AM AEST
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The best of decor that could make a home beautiful is the love; and you my friend, have said it with great easy and grace. very good indeed.
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Re: Decorate My World
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by Dom on
Tuesday, 20th February 2007 @ 08:08:27 AM AEST
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I loved this poem, especially as I used to have a thing about interior decorating as a kid. The last line is great!
Don't worry about others' derogatory comments, I think you're a very talented writer and I always enjoy reading your poems!
Take care,
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Re: Decorate My World
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 20th February 2007 @ 02:36:28 PM AEST
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This piece literally danced in my mind as I read it! There was such a sweetness and purity and humble (I never said a word to those who put there rooms as such,
I guess I just concluded they didn’t have “The Touch”) in the "passion" of your write. And then to end it so wise ---- with love ---- was a magnificent touch of class! Very excellent writing so enjoyable to read.
wabl
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Re: Decorate My World
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by PhantomVampyress on
Tuesday, 20th February 2007 @ 06:29:31 PM AEST
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this is a very creative piece.. I really enjoyed it.. its kinda enlightening to read.. I really like the imagery you get from this. my mom does that with rooms too designs them in her mind and it also made me think of her. great job in imagery and creativeness here
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