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The broken
Contributed by
rhei76
on
Monday, 19th February 2007 @ 04:47:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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In love with the broken
Always trying to fix oneself
Entangled in the tear drops of failure
Leaving salt to taste the times
I drank the
Water
I eat the
Bread
I venture forth
And burn the lines
Forever with the dead
Home of this insignificant port
Entertwinded with the drops of failure
Leaving salt to taste the tears
I drank
Reality
I ate the
Lie
I venture forth
to feel the time
of the broken
Copyright ©
rhei76
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2007-02-19 16:47:18]
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Re: The broken
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by needledancing on
Monday, 19th February 2007 @ 05:13:11 PM AEST
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| there are the broken and he fixers...thank goodness...I have no problem with the broken as long as they don't break me. Good piece makes you think.....are you a fixer or a broken? |
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Re: The broken
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by Vampirequeen on
Monday, 19th February 2007 @ 05:56:04 PM AEST
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hmmm very interesting piece
makes you think
good rite |
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Re: The broken
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by unknown_utopia on
Monday, 19th February 2007 @ 08:04:46 PM AEST
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Interesting Indeed
well done |
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Re: The broken
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by PhantomVampyress on
Tuesday, 20th February 2007 @ 12:52:31 PM AEST
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a very powerful piece reminds me of some of my older stuff.. I like the expression in this .. great job
vampyress jenni |
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