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I Just Wanted
Contributed by
MickeyPigKnuckles
on
Monday, 19th February 2007 @ 09:23:09 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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" I Just Wanted "
I Just Wanted to love you
I Just Wanted to care
I Just Wanted to hold you
I Just Wanted you there
it does not matter how hard I tried
it does not matter I cared
it does not matter the tears I cried
it does not matter we shared
You never worried the way I feel
when you left me all alone
you never worried if this was real
when you left me on my own
You left me with the memories
of the life we shared together
you left me with the memories
I thought would last forever
I Just Wanted to love you
I Just Wanted to care
I Just Wanted to hold you
I Just Wanted you there!!!!!
Penned By James L. McHenry
Copyright © 2007 James L. McHenry
Copyright © 2007 By Mickey Pig Knuckles
Copyright © 2007 Mickey Pig Knuckles (All rights reserved)
Copyright © 2007 HeartFelt TM
Quote: Life Is Poetry In Motion, Great Poets Reflect Emotion
The Best And Most Beautiful Thing In The World Can’t Be Seen Or Touched
It Must Be Felt With Your Heart
Copyright ©
MickeyPigKnuckles
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2007-02-19 09:23:09]
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Re: I Just Wanted
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by PhantomVampyress on
Monday, 19th February 2007 @ 11:09:35 AM AEST
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this is so sadly penned out but so full of emotions.. awesome job in this piece
vampyress jenni |
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Re: I Just Wanted
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by yangdantien on
Monday, 19th February 2007 @ 03:08:11 PM AEST
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This is a great blues song with harp harmonics stretching into a ballad. There is a lot of passion for a singer to belt this out and take 'em home.
Well Done
Peace
Yang |
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Re: I Just Wanted
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by needledancing on
Monday, 19th February 2007 @ 03:24:50 PM AEST
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| Don't ever think for one minute this pain of love lost does not make you grow..greater and more loving every day.....where did those bandaids go.....Obviously I feel the pain in your words...that's a good thing Right? |
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Re: I Just Wanted
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by brew on
Monday, 19th February 2007 @ 03:31:49 PM AEST
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One must love to know the pain of it all.Yes it is a horrible thing, but can be grand.! YOU will love again.....Beautifully written, with so much hope. Thanks for sharing
Brew~ |
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Re: I Just Wanted
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by unknown_utopia on
Monday, 19th February 2007 @ 08:21:22 PM AEST
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Love may hurt
but
it sure gets the InnerVisions flowing
well done |
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Re: I Just Wanted
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by myheartsvoice on
Tuesday, 20th February 2007 @ 01:32:07 AM AEST
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How straight foward this poem is, i felt your hurt and even more the futility of a love not brought to fruition. This has the innosence
of a child behind it. Truly a touching peice.
myheartsvoice
thank you kindly also for the comment. |
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