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My Ivory Thorn
Contributed by
xXdeadXpoetXx
on
Monday, 19th February 2007 @ 07:22:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I walk into a cold room
A flower on the ground
The sides are lined with thornes
Like razors all around
The petals; ivory color
The texture; that of silk
It looked disturbed yet beautiful
The stem begins to wilt
It won't admit the beauty
That's raining from it's stem
I try to get ahold of it
It tries to let me in
My hand can't bare to break it
It's stronger than it looks
I've never seen perfection
Like this; not even in books
I let go of the flower
I walk out of the room
I wish there was a way to prove this
To everyone I knew
I hope the flower knows this
It's better than the rest
And how I'd love to hold its
Beauty to my chest
I hope he knows the flower
Is a symbol of his grace
I hope this eyes will light up
When he sees my face
I hope this "us" will last a while
'Cause he's the best I've had
In the realm of all the good
I cannot find the bad
So shall I read this poem?
And tell him how I feel?
I know this boy's amazing
These feeling for him are real
I walk into the room again
The flower's with one more
This time it's with a blackened rose
Tangled to the core
It's brought this rose out of the soil
The black and white shall blend
The ivory one's not wilting
The stems' aligned again
And what I've said is mischief
And all these words get lost
I want this "us" to be well used
Without one speck of dust
So now I leave the flower
The two are sweet to see
I love how you're the ivory
And the blackened rose is me
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Re: My Ivory Thorn
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by needledancing on
Monday, 19th February 2007 @ 04:57:36 PM AEST
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| this is absolutely beautiful....so well done..I went ahhhh at the end...The two are sweet to see.I love how you're the ivory and the blackened rose is me. I have learned that in life others mirrow who we are....so you see you are really that ivory flower....surprise! |
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Re: My Ivory Thorn
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by Rhei76 on
Monday, 19th February 2007 @ 04:59:40 PM AEST
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| nicely wrote. |
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