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Because You Are a Male
Contributed by
TypenLutschen
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Monday, 24th February 2003 @ 04:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
sarcasticpoetry
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We sat in silence every day
and touched each other's souls
you told me I could be someone
If only I had goals.
You tell me I could be a queen
If only I would try,
You say I should apply myself
and never question why.
We muttered words through glittered skin
we breathed each other's grace
but I could see my biggest flaws
when gazing at your face.
you think you have the key to life,
the secret gift of braille,
but you don't feel a single thing
Because you are a male.
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TypenLutschen
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2003-02-24 04:00:00]
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Re: Because You Are a Male
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by kangarose on
Monday, 24th February 2003 @ 05:57:47 AM AEST
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| OUCH you sure are venting but i love the context of your poem you have put it all together so very well i think there is a very hurt spirit within yourself right now you vent all you want becuase if you didn't have the anger and the hurt there you wouldn't be venting such a lovely poem... well done!! |
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Re: Because You Are a Male
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by DreamWeaver on
Monday, 24th February 2003 @ 07:22:05 AM AEST
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| Great poem ... very well written. |
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Re: Because You Are a Male
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by CowgirlKid on
Monday, 24th February 2003 @ 09:51:10 AM AEST
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| I love your poem. I am very hurt by a male atm..so it only goes down all the better! Beautifully written! |
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Re: Because You Are a Male
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 27th February 2003 @ 11:17:57 PM AEST
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| you remind me of my friend kimmie. she hated men and ran me into the ground for being one. I didn't let this bother me.....I loved her and kept trying to show her I'm not some dumb heart less guytrying to get her drunk and F*** her ona frida night. finally after three years she finally saw this and she loves me back. |
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Re: Because You Are a Male
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by Jilly on
Tuesday, 6th May 2003 @ 05:31:57 AM AEST
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| For a long time I got along great with the bitterness I befriended... then I met an incredible man ... he helped me to reject the bitterness of the previous male influence, I wrote Evloution of Contentment for him.....excellent write!!!! ~Jilly |
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