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Metallic Wings
Contributed by
needledancing
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Sunday, 18th February 2007 @ 08:23:37 PM in AEST
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Birds with no feathers fly through the sky.
Silver streaks of lightening crossing each other in flight.
Birds bellies full of cargo of undigested prey.
The path they take should tire their metallic wings
Leaving earth the unnatural rip from gravity shakes the ground.
Unmastered, bumping through the climatic flow above.
Struggling through atmosphere, untraveled by their feathered scholars.
Mystifying the fascinated souls below who now believe we can fly.
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Re: Metallic Wings
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by yangdantien on
Sunday, 18th February 2007 @ 09:54:26 PM AEST
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I live near an airport and feel this pieces righteousness with so many flights and smoke trails filling the sky the little ones say it best pointing up 'look we can fly?'
Well Done
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Re: Metallic Wings
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by FRANCO on
Tuesday, 20th February 2007 @ 06:27:11 AM AEST
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It had always been my fascination to fly alone all by myself in the sky. and your poem just spoke out my wonderment about flying. great write.
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Re: Metallic Wings
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by unknown_utopia on
Wednesday, 21st February 2007 @ 07:00:42 PM AEST
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I also live near a airport
it really is interesting
and thought provoking
knowing people are flying in those things
with metallic wings...
well done. |
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