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my enemy
Contributed by
catz77
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Sunday, 18th February 2007 @ 08:22:28 PM in AEST
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Sadness can portray
Someone’s deepest fear
It calls you in a way
that no one else can hear
What’s the meaning of sad?
It makes me feel helpless
And destroys what I have
I’m left alone and hopeless
It will only grow gradually
Like the roots of a tree
It will not leave me be
Sadness is my enemy
.
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Re: my enemy
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by yangdantien on
Sunday, 18th February 2007 @ 09:11:08 PM AEST
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Bravo so good enough to teach young children.
It is important to know your enemy has its roots in self pity.
Well Done
Peace
Yangdantien |
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Re: my enemy
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by needledancing on
Monday, 19th February 2007 @ 03:58:27 PM AEST
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| If sadness be your enemy then be a friend of joy.....What know you of happiness....if you have never been sad....the great alpha/omega of our emotions....we shall all make that journey and write well of it to guide others....Good wisdom in your words. |
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Re: my enemy
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by unknown_utopia on
Monday, 19th February 2007 @ 08:50:42 PM AEST
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| good innervision |
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Re: my enemy
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 1st June 2008 @ 04:16:13 AM AEST
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| Simple write but deep with meaning. So much said in so few words. Great write..........Mike |
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