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Beyond Lines and Pages
Contributed by
Man_On_High
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Sunday, 18th February 2007 @ 12:55:04 AM in AEST
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It is impossible to describe
the opaque light cast out
by our immutable gray sky
that shines far beyond the scope
and range of life and hope,
where otherwise should lie,
that which offers the utmost tranquility;
freedom from the mortal
and tortuous futility of time.
That we should not struggle
a single moment
of unbridled degradation,
but flourish far beyond
the narcissistic and objective views
and decisions made post-haste
concerning the final summation
of our lives..
our book of ages;
regardless of whether or not the best of us
be found in the many lines and pages.
B
Copyright ©
Man_On_High
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2007-02-18 00:55:04]
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Re: Beyond Lines and Pages
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by emystar on
Sunday, 18th February 2007 @ 10:16:14 PM AEST
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Manificent writing as always, my friend.
Big huggs,
emy |
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Re: Beyond Lines and Pages
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by wizard on
Sunday, 18th February 2007 @ 10:19:09 PM AEST
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there is much truth in this write, bro... very thought provoking... i like it a lot..
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Re: Beyond Lines and Pages
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by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 18th February 2007 @ 10:26:13 PM AEST
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While I don't altogether understand why this resonates with me... Something in between the lines speaks to me, and leaves me lingering on this page... and the words and emotions that seem to go hand in hand here. On first read I get this feeling of indecision, yet on subsequent reads I can't help but feel this finality somehow. Either way, I enjoyed the read, and the title is more than suited!!
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Re: Beyond Lines and Pages
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by Vampirequeen on
Monday, 19th February 2007 @ 11:40:58 AM AEST
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i have to say billy you have got to be one of the best writer i have ever had the pleasure to read. :)
great job
hugs |
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Re: Beyond Lines and Pages
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by brew on
Monday, 19th February 2007 @ 03:25:21 PM AEST
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What a wonderful, depth soul writing. But does one, have ponderings? Hm.I gathered that from the words penned....hey, my own opinion, ya know. But as always, Im glad to see the pen of yours before me. So how ya been? Missed ya friend.....let me know all thats happening.
Brew~ |
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Re: Beyond Lines and Pages
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 19th February 2007 @ 03:28:30 PM AEST
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ahhhh the bigger picture as it were....so true, or should I say that which should truely be!
Very sage good sir!! |
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Re: Beyond Lines and Pages
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by unknown_utopia on
Monday, 19th February 2007 @ 08:48:39 PM AEST
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Excellent Excellent flow
well done. |
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Re: Beyond Lines and Pages
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by shelby on
Saturday, 24th February 2007 @ 01:30:15 AM AEST
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I so love the magical air within your writes, your penned thoughts indeed touch this heart always.
I have not been on much so am taking a late night trip through to leave a brief comment.
hugssss
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Re: Beyond Lines and Pages
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Friday, 23rd March 2007 @ 07:11:11 PM AEST
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Billy~
There is always that something special about your writes my dear friend. This is
a real thought provoking piece. Yes I
believe there is so much more beyond
the lines and pages. Stirs up alot of deep
emotions, but your incredible poetry has
always had that effect on me dearest Billy~
Such truth spills from your eloquently
written words. A true word master you
captivate the readers poetic soul. Thumbs
up hun. An outstanding write.
much love n hugs ur fan/friend,
sue m
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