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Contributed by needledancing on Saturday, 17th February 2007 @ 01:26:17 PM in AEST
Topic: FriendshipPoetry



A special friend gave me a gift that I will put to text.
For every time his heart got broke, he always said “Next.”
It seemed a simple thing to do
Yet hard to say when you knew the who.

Another dealt with pain of heart
By tearing everything apart.
I wish I had the answer to how we each must cope.
When we get left with torn up hearts by an undeserving dope.

I say we take them out to crowd and bring them public shame.
We advertise to all who love the ruthless shredders name.
We go to see their Mother and find out why she taught,
This treacherous human being how to love-Naught!

I guess we’re born to learn the lessons love does teach us well.
To all who haven’t been there, Tell Love to go to hell.
It’s better that you find a friend,
Friendship true will never end.




Copyright © needledancing ... [ 2007-02-17 13:26:17]
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Re: Next (User Rating: 1 )
by FRANCO on Saturday, 17th February 2007 @ 08:39:53 PM AEST
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Good and a very thought provoking poem.
Selfless friendship shall truly never end Indeed.

You are a great thinker my friend.

FRANCO


Re: Next (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 17th February 2007 @ 09:54:21 PM AEST
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Good work.
I can certainly relate.
big huggs,
emy


Re: Next (User Rating: 1 )
by yangdantien on Sunday, 18th February 2007 @ 01:25:27 AM AEST
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As the heart is evolving some may line them up and go through them but this piece shows the good character to care and not loiter on the path of growth that each heart can make toward its own brilliance.

Good Job

Peace
Yang


Re: Next (User Rating: 1 )
by Dom on Monday, 19th February 2007 @ 07:24:57 AM AEST
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A truly sweet, beautiful poem filled with hope; true friendships are indeed very powerful.

Dom




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