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LEVEL
Contributed by
skyhawk432
on
Saturday, 17th February 2007 @ 10:27:46 AM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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(12)Le repli est fait...
(chock) Manifesto de cartel... libel. max,well. citadel...
storm,front struc,ture mast) I cat(er THE PROBLEM...
HELL,
krieg be) the so(a)lut(e)ion to (gins,stain
right,rain cesspool surgeon strider: to shine a-new...
HEAVEN.
Light,force,sword. on rocks bend might-fall...
Light,force,sword. in tension grasping a bomb-[i]
nation in suspender strap the quickened quakes
of rap,ture cap,ture
killer catcher adheres the soon..
go,right left,back un,done fun,bad
septum silly sacrilege silence in skill.
Metamicromegamindwarp measures Mist) the bleak.
the weak. the (stakes made in U.S.(.)
(21)La bande est coupee...
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Notes:
-Periods represent not only pauses but number of beats in between phrases. (Rests)
-")("=Broken connection of a word. Example:
The tre)e is in the trinity of stres(s.
Tre)(s. = Tres= three in "Spanish".
-Capitalized words are emphasized terms.
-Fully capitalized words are extremely emphasized.
-Words in "()" are add on phrases or letters that indirectly join with the line while letters that are underlined are the letters taken out so the "()" letters make sense.
EX:
My train is rea(r)lly late.
=My train is early.
-"," is like a period except it adds a small pause between usually hyphened terms. Also, the beat of the word is 3 instead of the amount of syllables.
EX:
Small train= 2 beats
Small,train= 3 beats
":" Works like a period except there's more connectivity between the paused terms.
-[]=letter add-on
-Le repli est fait..: The clinch is made.
-La bande est coupee...: The tape is cut.
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Re: LEVEL
(User Rating: 1 ) by ferasdour on
Saturday, 17th February 2007 @ 09:52:01 PM AEST (User
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this is the most knowledge iv seen in most any art form in quite some time. its proves to be more riddled and leveled than most poetry these days. in relatively other words, i liked this seamingly broken system. |
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