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Figure it out
Contributed by
kims4ever
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Friday, 16th February 2007 @ 09:04:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Knocking on my door, a ghost of the past.
I feel something here, but i'm not quite sure, if this feeling would even last.
Wrong again, but maybe not, i know for sure this ghost has forgot.
right is wrong, an in between, a shady mix but yet so clean,
peel it back, pull it out, have a look, reclaim your doubts.
Just leave it here after you wear it out, it's not your mess, since your giving up.
Jump in the water, drying your soul with tears, shake away importance, reclaim your fears.
The sparrow wonders, angry leaves, shaking apart the ground.
The crow flew north so it seems, to be shunned by a curious doubt.
When all you get is a bucket, filled with nothing but broken water.
I'll freeze it all and shatter his dreams, so it can be whole.
A funny thing love is, coded with symbols and signs.
Just look passed the surface of things, to find thier grand design.
I'll leave this bucket filled with everything, but to you it just looks empty.
When you can see what these words mean, then you can feel the ending.
Copyright ©
kims4ever
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2007-02-16 21:04:18]
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Re: Figure it out
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by emystar on
Friday, 16th February 2007 @ 09:48:29 PM AEST
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Awesome writing-n-reasoning.
Big huggs,
emy |
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Re: Figure it out
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by whispers_2_your_ear on
Friday, 16th February 2007 @ 11:11:52 PM AEST
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| good poem. I could use another bucket. |
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