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Our favourite lil mosquito
Contributed by
Malcolmsdreamgirl
on
Friday, 16th February 2007 @ 06:21:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
HumorPoetry
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That dear little mosquito
I log onto my poet site to submit my daily poem
Just before I get to where, that day I shall be going
And sure enough,,,, right there he is, hounding me again today
That Darn buzzing mossie- quito, thats here for sure to stay
I aim my little cursor, at his long long pointy nose
Then off he flies to the right, then left then right then back he goes
I miss him once and growl at him, Im gonna get him soon!
he flaps his wings much faster now and to the side he'll zoom
Finally, when I aim at him, and get him right between the eyes!
I sit back quite elate, and eventually gently Sigh......
Ahh,,,,,, that's better, back to silence, without his drilling buzz
And family enquire Mum what is all the fuss?
I tell them of this insect, that continually hunts me down
They look upon my desktop, and faces all with frown
Don't worry Mum, you're not the only one he irratates
Yesterday I killed him twice, then he annoyed my mates
How many of you zap him? or do you think hes cute?
Or like me do you always think How many times dya have to shoot!
At first it was a novelty he'd go quiet once he was hit
Now hes driving me insane and getting on my ....... nerves ...
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Malcolmsdreamgirl
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Re: Our favourite lil mosquito
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Friday, 16th February 2007 @ 06:46:31 PM AEST (User
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They sure are pesty little devils.
This is a very good, entertaining write.
Big smiles,
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Re: Our favourite lil mosquito
(User Rating: 1 ) by MickeyPigKnuckles on
Saturday, 17th February 2007 @ 12:15:02 AM AEST (User
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Malcolmsdreamgirl, Now days we have to be careful with those pesky little creatures as they now carry the west nile disease and just the past few years some have lost their lives to those blood suckers. I really enjoyed your playfullness with this piece and I know for sure that every reader can relate.
Your Dear Friend
Mickey Pig Knuckles
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Re: Our favourite lil mosquito
(User Rating: 1 ) by needledancing on
Saturday, 17th February 2007 @ 07:44:44 AM AEST (User
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We have all tried in vain to get that pest and still he finds us such a good food source. Thank goodness they are not much bigger they make such a mess when you do get em...
I thought this was well done..funny ...and made me itchy... |
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