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In Darkness Given (English Sonnet)
Contributed by
feralpen
on
Friday, 16th February 2007 @ 11:01:46 AM in AEST
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In Darkness Given
My spirit grate against the darkened pane
A hunger well within I won't control
In sweet repose on pillow is she lain
I crave her scent but know it can't be stole
Rise and fall O gently sleeping breast
Thy flesh entice beyond all mortal will
As now I strain against locked portal pressed
My dark dream hastens to her cros't the sill
Now blanket fall away from barren skin
And unashamed her body heeds my call
Her hand now turns the latch to let me in
Then naked on the pillows doth she fall
Warm and sweet I taste while her essence pour
With dawn I part, for she can give no more
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Re: In Darkness Given (English Sonnet)
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by lillyjane on
Friday, 16th February 2007 @ 11:21:53 AM AEST
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| I love this its beautiful but you can feel the dark force, just brilliant. xxx |
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Re: In Darkness Given (English Sonnet)
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by brew on
Friday, 16th February 2007 @ 01:24:01 PM AEST
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What power and depth....Beautiful write.! As one lays in the nite, waiting, for someone, yet they cant have them......
Brew~ |
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Re: In Darkness Given (English Sonnet)
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by yangdantien on
Friday, 16th February 2007 @ 01:25:56 PM AEST
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Ahh to hear this spoken in Italian. Most elegantly delivered.
I like feeling your pen stretch and flow into different formats. We are honored to have your good posts. Thank You for sharing here at YPDC.
Well Done
Peace
Yang |
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Re: In Darkness Given (English Sonnet)
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by hauntedscorp on
Saturday, 17th February 2007 @ 01:17:34 AM AEST
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This is a great piece, composed so well! In true poetic fashion you said so very much, in so few words. I really enjoyed this; keep it up.
~Scorp.
(Who LOVES your nic too, btw!) |
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Re: In Darkness Given (English Sonnet)
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 17th February 2007 @ 09:55:49 AM AEST
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*fans self*
interesting sonnet, my friend. lol I've never read
one with such sensual passion dripping from
each line .. especially those last two lines! whoa!
~Breezy |
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