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Hanging On
Contributed by
soulsearching43
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Friday, 16th February 2007 @ 09:45:50 AM in AEST
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Trapped inside a darkness no words can explain
just trying to escape the never ending pain
My questions go in circles running round and round
searching for the answers where they can not be found
I long for just one moment of sanity and peace
but often I will settle for an easier release
for everyday that passes I excuse with another lie
anxiously awaiting the moment that I die
I have so many questions I need to understand
like who gets to decide who gets the winning hand
life is so disturbing and hard to comprehend
that so often you can't tell who is foe or friend
so today i'll hold on with everything I have to give
hoping there will come a day that I will want to live
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2007-02-16 09:45:50]
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Re: Hanging On
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by FRANCO on
Friday, 16th February 2007 @ 10:44:10 AM AEST
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You are very right in the last couplet, hope that keeps us going, and it is this hope that gives us the strength to face the next day bravely.
Friend you have penned this poem cleverly optimistic.
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Re: Hanging On
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by lillyjane on
Friday, 16th February 2007 @ 11:48:04 AM AEST
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| I can relate to this I went through depression all last year and some of the year before, you question everything when you feel this way, I still get bad days but got myself better by fighting back and one way was writing poetry.. You describe it just as it feels a really great poem xxxxx |
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Re: Hanging On
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by UrMyInspiration on
Friday, 16th February 2007 @ 03:31:45 PM AEST
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| There is so much sadness in this poem. Very thoughtfully expressed and very touching... |
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Re: Hanging On
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by Bleedthelove on
Friday, 16th February 2007 @ 08:42:37 PM AEST
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| I know the feeling too well. Beautifully written and expressed. Excellent job. |
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Re: Hanging On
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by Dom on
Saturday, 17th February 2007 @ 10:21:32 AM AEST
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This is beautifully and sucicntly expresses, I think a lot of people will be able to easily relate to this. I am glad things have got better for you now,
Dom |
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