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Surgical Bondage
Contributed by
skyhawk432
on
Friday, 16th February 2007 @ 08:02:33 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I'm about six C-Sections away
from seeing your face, with me,
rearranging it in my mind,
( A little cut here, a tapering there,
even out the brows; heck, fix the
blushes a little maybe: most definitely
that nose, you look like a sledgehammer
had its way with your nasal cavity.)
giving you plastic surgery to fix
those God-made errors.
I'll be past the steps to the
elevator in less time than a vasectomy
to see you at the service desk; and
when I approach to say "hello", you'll get a
whiff of my cologne and me your
arousing scent.
(Hmmm... smells like paprika and
sage with almost the hint of hormones
and sexual attraction... what have you
been cookin' in the kitchen?)
I'll watch you on the job during breaks
and fix all of your ailments (especially
that saggy buttocks) when performing colonoscopies.
(And I know you'll be seeing me when you're 50.)
I'd abort thousands of fetuses
just to see your scalped smile.
(And many others that might
pop out after our "physical" that
I have planned for us in the backroom's
closet.)
But, for now, I'll trace hearts with Cupid's arrow.
(On my
next patient's liver.)
Copyright ©
skyhawk432
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2007-02-16 08:02:33]
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Re: Surgical Bondage
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by Malcolmsdreamgirl on
Friday, 16th February 2007 @ 08:19:51 AM AEST
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I really liked this poem tho I had to read it twice before I fully understood it ..
Very good lol ....
shhh.... don't mention the "V" word this week!
Dee xx |
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Re: Surgical Bondage
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by yangdantien on
Friday, 16th February 2007 @ 02:13:55 PM AEST
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This is part OB-GYN part 'Nip Tuck' and I loved it. A melange of medical and interpersonal insights that are really quite revealing. You capture texture, sights, sounds, scents that make this a feast for the senses.
Bravo
Well Done
Peace
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