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Seasons of your Mind
Contributed by
lillyjane
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Friday, 16th February 2007 @ 06:56:29 AM in AEST
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Seasons of your Mind
Shards of light, flow through the trees,
whispering voices float on the breeze,
telling you softly, loves there to gain,
stop all your tears, that fall like the rain,
Shadows in your mind,emotions all torn,
will pass away, and fade like the storm,
you have weathered this far,
like the seasons you changed,
you have nothing to lose,
youve been through the pain,
in Autumn leaves full, leave the trees bear,
you know how it feels, you have been there,
so open your mind let in the sun,
that time has passed,
summers begun..
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lillyjane
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2007-02-16 06:56:29]
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Re: Seasons of your Mind
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by soulsearching43 on
Friday, 16th February 2007 @ 08:16:46 AM AEST
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| your very gifted keep them coming |
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Re: Seasons of your Mind
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by needledancing on
Friday, 16th February 2007 @ 09:47:52 AM AEST
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| I love this. It speaks of the gain one has when love has lost. So many times we dwell in the pain when we love and lose. This focus is on being open to chance love again and learn more about ourselves.Excellent |
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Re: Seasons of your Mind
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by yangdantien on
Friday, 16th February 2007 @ 02:45:14 PM AEST
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What a good poem capturing the metaphor of seasons elements as the apply to the mind.
Well Done
Peace
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Re: Seasons of your Mind
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by venkat on
Friday, 9th March 2007 @ 05:25:49 AM AEST
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| GOOD..GOOD. -:) venkat |
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Re: Seasons of your Mind
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 18th March 2007 @ 08:00:06 AM AEST
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| Nice work Lilly, words seem to be coming back to you :) |
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Re: Seasons of your Mind
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 27th April 2007 @ 05:40:10 AM AEST
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beautiful...
love n' hugs nessa |
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