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but Wait slow down

Contributed by snowflake on Thursday, 15th February 2007 @ 09:41:42 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



Its like CAmeras flashing

lights, camera, Action

Pictures Taking no time wasting

Growing up and not looking back

kids smokin and drinking just alittle fact

No mothers or FAthers no place to call home

and we wonder why kids are missing they ran away from home

Kids critizing and disguising not being theirselves

Kids commiting suicide and cutting doing all sort of bad things to their health

BUT WAIT SLOW DOWN

lets pause for a one second

Take a breath thank God cause this could be our last minute

Have fun take pictures and enjoy the moment

SMile every chance cause were not promised to see the next morning

Tears Falling Deaths Calling

its just the way of life

Get your life together Give your life to christ

So when you die you go to heaven

Dont bUrn in Hades

Get baptized it wont even take 10 seconds

REmember to TrUSt N believe

BUT WAIT SLOW DOWN

were still going to fast

SEx before Marrige Not really in love

its getting alittle crazy

Kids having Kids not fully getting to live their life

but no its not a mistake

just should've strapped twice

girls liking girls boys like dudes

i mean it is your choice i'm not judging

i probably couldnt walk a mile in your shoes

BUT WAIT SLOW DOWN

Just alittle too fast

Promises broken Hearts shattered broken like glass

Gas prices about sky high

Kanye west stated George bush dont care about black people i wonder why

Its not all about the Rich N the FAmous

the money the cars

Someone out there cares about you and thinks your a star

STill blacks agasint whites

RAcsim around the whole world

Mexicans and Chinese are hated also

but blacks get the month i would be mad too

BUT WAIT SLOW DOWN

we just go thru life so fast

take the time to tell your parents you love them

and actually take the time show em

but wait we slowed down did we finally comprehend

if so we'll eventually know when we go to meet the man

But wait dont forget

SLOW DOWN

Dont go to fast live life to the fullest

breath in and out it could be the last<3333





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Re: but Wait slow down (User Rating: 1 )
by MickeyPigKnuckles on Thursday, 15th February 2007 @ 10:35:44 PM AEST
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snowflake, Very interesting write here as it stirred some thought as it contained many facts of daily life and choices to be made trying to survive the reality of life. Thank you for sharing this with us all and for giving us a little of your creative personality. Wonderful poem.

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Re: but Wait slow down (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 15th February 2007 @ 10:49:17 PM AEST
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At times the truth is heart wrenching.
Good work.
One thing I know 100% is that I'm Jesus kid 'cause he created me.
big huggs,
emy




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