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Floating
Contributed by
BOZEEN
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Thursday, 15th February 2007 @ 05:14:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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I miss you so much I'm alway's hearing how after time things will heal,but they
have not for me,since you've been gone my heart and soul have wondered this
earth with no roots like a kite,I just go farther into the sky never stayin in one
place,I just drift around where my mind once was planted it no longer sits,It
moves about in my head I have no destination I just float,where my heart had love
it now has sorrow for all that I was and am has been taken,you no longer give me
my roots and he no longer gives me my way,for you see all that I was has died.
Copyright ©
BOZEEN
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2007-02-15 17:14:14]
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Re: Floating
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by needledancing on
Thursday, 15th February 2007 @ 05:39:14 PM AEST
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| Sadness. A good way to describe how love lost feels. |
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Re: Floating
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by Oceandreamer on
Thursday, 15th February 2007 @ 06:22:35 PM AEST
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| A sad write.Love makes one feel so very alive,and when love dies it almost deels like it takes everything els with it.You'll find the person thats meant for you in the right time and place.What is meant to be will be.Stay strong. Oceandreamer |
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Re: Floating
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by yangdantien on
Thursday, 15th February 2007 @ 08:38:14 PM AEST
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In my humble opinion, You Sir are a leaf with limbs. A pen in one appendage and even this would be enough but you have others with sense to lift and turn leaf to bird and hence able to fly directly. For Sorrow is your Enemy and I see a gift of wings. The wings of perception and yes like a kite with too long a tail weighted by the rock of sadness but once unraveled you will see your root is grafting and given more time will take and spread you in balance between 'grounding and flight.'
No matter how we part the other always saw the best in us and clearly their wish is that you do not hurt and remember how to honor each other by celebrating the things we loved. Truly Our loved ones always ask in bittersweet reunions "So how have you expanded your horizons?" And think of what they say if your hurt in idle.
Blessings & Peace
Yang
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