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Dry Eyes
Contributed by
xXxmegsxXx
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Thursday, 15th February 2007 @ 04:02:38 PM in AEST
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Heavy, drooping,
Silenced eyes
Accept the pain
That they despise.
No more droplets,
No more tears.
There's no escape
From all these fears.
With battle lost,
White flag hung high,
Throughout the screams
My eyes stay dry.
The anguish echoes
And won't depart,
The pain destroying
My once full heart.
Copyright ©
xXxmegsxXx
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2007-02-15 16:02:38]
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Re: Dry Eyes
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by Oceandreamer on
Thursday, 15th February 2007 @ 05:45:07 PM AEST
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| Nice poem.You asked for suggestions for the tittle ....How about "No more Tears". Thanks for sharing!Take care. Oceandreamer |
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Re: Dry Eyes
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by Rhei76 on
Thursday, 15th February 2007 @ 06:20:15 PM AEST
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| It is an excellent write. maybe I'm not creative, but the name seems suitable. |
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Re: Dry Eyes
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by yangdantien on
Thursday, 15th February 2007 @ 06:38:53 PM AEST
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The title fits as it is lifted from the poem itself. I enjoy your writing and think you are an excellent poet so trust your self and whatever is causing the pain get rid of it.
However since you invited suggestions:
Fears Weep Not
Tear Less
Stones in my Eyes
When the Heart Hurts
You have penned one of my favorite poems here (Line) and I mention it as it did not receive as many comments as warrants its excellence.
Peace
Yang |
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Re: Dry Eyes
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by MickeyPigKnuckles on
Thursday, 15th February 2007 @ 10:20:47 PM AEST
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xXxmegsxXx, Just like yang, I too like this stype of poetry and the content was composed perfectly. The title, "Dry Eyes" is very well done as I think everyone had a suggestion or two but the one that seems to be the favorite is your choice. I think you gave it an excellent title. Thank you for sharing a little of your creative personality with us all and for giving us a small part of you.
Wonderful Poem
Mickey Pig Knuckles
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Re: Dry Eyes
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by Bleedthelove on
Friday, 16th February 2007 @ 09:32:12 AM AEST
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| This poem reminds me of someone I know. Excellent job. |
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