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The Effects Of A Broken Heart.
Contributed by
bleedthelove
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Thursday, 15th February 2007 @ 01:00:10 PM in AEST
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LostLove
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I'm feeling the effects of a broken heart
And it hurts so bad
That its taking my breath away
Out of control
All alone
I'm fading away
Trying to forget
The pain I feel inside
Bleeding from eyes
The tears I cannot hide
I wake up just to die
And I go to sleep just to cry
Dying slowly inside this situation
Drowning inside my own devastation
The effects of a broken heart
And the jagged fragments
Of my own soul falling apart
I'm losing sight and hope
underneath my skin I'm tired
It's getting harder to cope
I've lost my will
I've got nothing left
But my grave to fill
My existance is frozen
My veins run cold
The effects of my broken heart
Is the saddest story I've ever told.
...It hurts...
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bleedthelove
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2007-02-15 13:00:10]
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Re: The Effects Of A Broken Heart.
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by yangdantien on
Thursday, 15th February 2007 @ 01:30:48 PM AEST
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'The Effects Of A Broken Heart.' gracefully is better than never having loved at all. Think of the heart as a mirror and even the smallest shard can reflect the brightest light. Please continue writing and posting work it out with the pen. You deserve better and it will come when you fall in love with your life and by extension share it from a place of abundance instead of need.
Well Done
Peace
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Re: The Effects Of A Broken Heart.
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by brew on
Thursday, 15th February 2007 @ 01:47:19 PM AEST
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We alla fall, and will hopefully no more than, once. Yet...No one knows. Keep smiling, and do not search, for when least expected......BAM.....it happens. Beautiful and touching wrtie.
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Re: The Effects Of A Broken Heart.
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by MickeyPigKnuckles on
Thursday, 15th February 2007 @ 02:02:27 PM AEST
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bleedthelove, yes in deed a broken heart is so hurtful and you have poured your emotions out in this piece. I really felt the sadness and I am certain many others have as well. I have a big strong shoulder if you need someone to lean on as once again I am certain many other friends would also want to give you some support. You are awesome and we all admire you for who you are and for giving us such heartfelt works.
Your Dear Friend
Mickey Pig Knuckles
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Re: The Effects Of A Broken Heart.
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by Oceandreamer on
Thursday, 15th February 2007 @ 06:02:29 PM AEST
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| If you want to you can read my poem called "It was never meant to be".I have written it for everybody out there who has a broken heart.Hope it could bring some light to you... All the advice I would would give you is written in that poem and you are more than welcome to take a peak if you would like to.Take care. Oceandreamer |
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Re: The Effects Of A Broken Heart.
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by PhantomVampyress on
Thursday, 15th February 2007 @ 07:26:19 PM AEST
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beatifully tragic piece here but a sad masterpiece penned out.. an outpouring of feelings that is excellent.. beautiful write..
vampyress Jenni |
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