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Contributed by
rhei76
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Wednesday, 14th February 2007 @ 05:14:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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The begining of the begining
Back to the start
Where ice cicles
Hang from the heart
Back to the start
Ten years walking
Ten years walking in the dark
Now sunshine rises in the park
The dawn of a new day
With those same old doors
The time has come
Time will be
It's time to look back and see
Back to the start
Forest red and amber dark
Some have said
but more have parts
in my new old sound
Back to the start
The voice of Jim
Heard for the first time
It's time
To search the ruins
Save and recreate
A million new engineers
15 minutes of fame
With the degrees of seperation
The choas therome
Aldo Nova
Shakesphere, riddlen
Who cares?
I wanna smile
Oh, I like your smile
Back,
Back to the start
Back,
Before my heart
Grew ice cicles in the dark
Back,
Because I have witnessed a light
Something that has
Takin' my dreams, back
It's more
More convientual
More understanding
More conceptual
To the guidelines of reality
It's more
More patience
Like virtue
Less love
In the pace of time
More loss
Cuz everyday I learn alittle more
Back
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Re: back
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by PhantomVampyress on
Wednesday, 14th February 2007 @ 07:07:26 PM AEST
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a very creative write.. I like this piece alot.. its really expressive and it sounds like it could be a rock song
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Re: back
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by MickeyPigKnuckles on
Thursday, 15th February 2007 @ 08:24:18 AM AEST
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rhei76, what a beautiful orchestration of poetic literature you have composed here. Your warm glow of talent is shining brightly. This is one fine poem and one I am sure many will savor. Thank you for sharing with us all once again and for giving us just a little more of you.
Your Friend
Mickey Pig Knuckles
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Re: back
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by Vampirequeen on
Thursday, 15th February 2007 @ 11:37:49 PM AEST
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wow you did an awsome job on this write.
very creative |
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