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Single, Straight and Pisces
Contributed by
Franciswolf
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Wednesday, 14th February 2007 @ 01:53:54 AM in AEST
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Single, singly won, singly done,
I’ll single you out and swindle you fun
I’ve seen I’ve dreamed
Watched cavemen take a juice box out and continue circling
Singled for you, singled and true,
Single and blue, Single sign on a single avenue stating,
“Single Road, if you’re lonely come unload”
For single travelers that’s a single offer sold
Because I’m single, straight and Pisces
Straight, straight and steady, straight and deadly
Straight line of thinking, straight flashes blinking
Straightly out of mind, straightly at a bend
Straight and front leads to a single end
Single and Straight, Straight on hate,
Deceived, and late, you’re clocks all off,
For all the rumors you hack a straight cough
Because I’m single, straight and Pisces
Pisces, two fish in a stream
A Ying Yang in a dream, a March kind of scheme
Pisces, it entices, it derives bliss
Single, there is no singe Pisces, there are no straight flows
No water motioned in geometric terms to fashion what it shows
Pisces, a horoscope, the great lover, the straight emotional bender
The, defender of truth, the ender
Because I’m single, straight and Pisces
There once was a lady and there once was a bug
They formed together in a patch they dug
Red with passion and black with loss, they were fortunate at what’s been struck
And became good luck
Red and Black,
Passionate and Lost
Single, straight and Pisces
Copyright ©
Franciswolf
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2007-02-14 01:53:54]
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Re: Single, Straight and Pisces
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 14th February 2007 @ 06:36:55 AM AEST
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Well it's very creative writing.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Single, Straight and Pisces
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by yangdantien on
Wednesday, 14th February 2007 @ 10:44:21 AM AEST
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This has also a real musical rhythm and would work with a march like rock ballad perhaps. Great effort in expressing that which has an ambiguous nature (Astrology) to begin with.
Peace
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Re: Single, Straight and Pisces
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by UrMyInspiration on
Wednesday, 14th February 2007 @ 01:39:48 PM AEST
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“Single Road, if you’re lonely come unload”...
I love this line. Very creative and very enjoyable! |
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Re: Single, Straight and Pisces
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 15th February 2007 @ 11:10:46 AM AEST
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such a fresh and imagintive peice of writing please keep it up
Keep writing
keep smiling
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Re: Single, Straight and Pisces
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by Dom on
Thursday, 15th February 2007 @ 02:15:18 PM AEST
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I read the title and I knew I had to read it because I am 'Single, Straight and Pisces'. Its certainly a unique way of expressing the ideas and I loved the focused repetition in the stanzas.
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Re: Single, Straight and Pisces
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by franciswolf on
Thursday, 1st March 2007 @ 04:17:07 PM AEST
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Thank you for your comments,
I had a lot of influence for writing it.
It's based and for a bestfriend of mine
And I love her |
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