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Farewell
Contributed by
trialnerror
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Wednesday, 14th February 2007 @ 01:50:04 AM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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You have left a huge emptiness in me
Ever since, I became a lonesome entity
For a short while, you’ve become my life
A sense of power and a cause to strife
Now that emptiness is eating me up
My existence has become an empty cup
That cup was once filled with your smile
Which would get me to walk an endless mile
I’m back to my old boring self
Just another brokenhearted guy on a shelf
Everyday before I sleep I used to pray,
Together forever we would stay
Too bad, it wasn’t meant to be
That “I and you”, could’ve become “we”
But it’s okay I’m used to it
To be a lover, I’m not fit
I really wanted to catch you when you fell
But it’s too late now we already said farewell
Copyright ©
trialnerror
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2007-02-14 01:50:04]
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Re: Farewell
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 14th February 2007 @ 06:40:50 AM AEST
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It's great writing and to the point.
huggs,
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Re: Farewell
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by crazy on
Wednesday, 14th February 2007 @ 10:39:22 AM AEST
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| wow!!i could feel the emotions as i read the words...like a song but without music just the rythem of the words to keep you going....and the heart felt emotion behind the poem...wow....i love this...and in a girl perspective,when a guy breaks upi with me i feel the same way....-------fantastic job---crazy |
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Re: Farewell
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by seafire on
Wednesday, 14th February 2007 @ 01:43:28 PM AEST
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this poem was so sad. do you still love her? is there a chance you can get back . it seems like something happened to make you break up with her. i hope you find whatever you are looking for this is truly beautiful tribute to your ex relationship
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Re: Farewell
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by seafire on
Wednesday, 14th February 2007 @ 01:43:34 PM AEST
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this poem was so sad. do you still love her? is there a chance you can get back . it seems like something happened to make you break up with her. i hope you find whatever you are looking for this is truly beautiful tribute to your ex relationship
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Re: Farewell
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by UrMyInspiration on
Wednesday, 14th February 2007 @ 01:52:51 PM AEST
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| Beautifully expressed. Well done. |
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