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Season of You
Contributed by
smilin_eyes
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Tuesday, 13th February 2007 @ 10:56:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
Nostalgic
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'Cascading rainfall',
from brown 'cloudy' eyes,
As the Soft Serene Silences,
rung the pearl blue skies...
Am wading through the memory lane,
so precious,so sweet,
As the cool playful waves
kiss my thristy feet.
Had built lofty sandcastles,
on the foundation of innocent dreams,
Furnished them with wishes,
which I was never able to redeem...
Trying to collect the seashells;
tossed all over the beach,
In the Hope to find,
What I could never reach...
My own tears drowned my sandcastles,
And the chilly wind of fate trampled them too,
Is the weather really gloomy,
Or has that 'Stormy Season' arrived, when I only think about you...
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smilin_eyes
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2007-02-13 22:56:46]
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Re: Season of You
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 13th February 2007 @ 11:02:50 PM AEST
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This is imply awesomely written.
Great work!
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Season of You
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by yangdantien on
Tuesday, 13th February 2007 @ 11:08:21 PM AEST
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Such an elegant expression only a true dreamer has such wings to spread so wide.
Excellent
Peace
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Re: Season of You
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by UrMyInspiration on
Wednesday, 14th February 2007 @ 02:04:24 PM AEST
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| Such a peaceful, elegant poem. Thank you for sharing! Very enjoyable! |
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