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THOUGHTS
Contributed by
brew
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Tuesday, 13th February 2007 @ 09:06:27 PM in AEST
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Some say faith
Some say hope
I say.... Happiness
Can one be so bold to use "that" word
Pondering thoughts,bring such meaning
The 3 little words
Do we see what really is felt?
Again....
Faith
Hope
Happiness
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brew
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Re: THOUGHTS
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by yangdantien on
Tuesday, 13th February 2007 @ 09:37:23 PM AEST
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3 big words & many thoughts one of which is to give happiness because if its about giving maybe everyone will start doing it.
Blessings
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Re: THOUGHTS
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 13th February 2007 @ 11:01:42 PM AEST
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Your positive soul and endearing heart are truly two of
the most remarkable and beautiful things to behold, Dayna ..
So much conviction in your words and said with such strength ..
there is a magic to your writes, hun.
*hugs*
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Re: THOUGHTS
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 14th February 2007 @ 01:35:54 AM AEST
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Bbbbbbbiiiiiiiiiiiiiiigggg,pppppowerfull, simple words!
Awesome!
hugg. smiles,
emy |
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Re: THOUGHTS
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by Oceandreamer on
Wednesday, 14th February 2007 @ 04:15:47 PM AEST
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| A short and powerful write.I like it....i do! Oceandreamer |
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Re: THOUGHTS
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 19th February 2007 @ 03:44:19 PM AEST
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| ahhh three of my favorite words...I wish they fit better for me as they seem to for you.....ah well....someday..... |
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Re: THOUGHTS
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by FRANCO on
Tuesday, 20th February 2007 @ 11:44:45 AM AEST
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A poem with a short punch power.
The three words are so interconnected; one does not exist with out another.
GOOD WRITE, THANKS FOR SHARING.
FRANCO. |
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Re: THOUGHTS
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by Man_On_High on
Saturday, 24th February 2007 @ 02:23:20 AM AEST
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Dayna,
..your few words have me caught up in the moment here-
I cannot admit, on behalf of anyone other than me, to having seen that, wich might lead to faith, hope and happiness..
and having, willfully squandered it-
but I CAN say, with confidence, that most of us are likely to turn away, so as to NOT see it-
..in order to protect ourselves from the unknown.
truly, a shameful way to slither through life-
and I am guilty as charged~
..great, thought-provoking write, Dayna-
you've really given me something to think about.
B
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Re: THOUGHTS
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by myheartsvoice on
Monday, 19th March 2007 @ 09:33:31 AM AEST
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Great poem even greater question dayna. I'm begining to wonder. Very compelling write to say the least. Love the point blank approach.
Ben |
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