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It was never meant to be
Contributed by
Oceandreamer
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Tuesday, 13th February 2007 @ 06:08:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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We’ve loved with all our hearts, and given it all we’ve got. A soul connection and burning hearts, but a love that couldn’t stand the test of time. There was no turning back the hands of time, all that we’ve had was fallen apart. There’s nothing left ,but fading memories, of magical moments and star cluttered skies. We’ve had it all, you and me, I really thought you where my destiny. Tomorrow is promising a new sun… There’s no point in holding on, to a love that was never meant to be. Our paths crossed for a reason, and I’ll be forever grateful for our season. We where granted the most precious gift, a chance to love…even though not for long. I’ll treasure our special love song, as a beautiful memory ready to fly. I’ve done my time… no more tears, I shall not cry. With these words I’ll set you free, making space for the new to enter my life. Our love was never meant to be.
I’m on my way to distant shores, my special someone is waiting for me…
Copyright ©
Oceandreamer
... [
2007-02-13 18:08:57]
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Re: It was never meant to be
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by needledancing on
Tuesday, 13th February 2007 @ 08:35:56 PM AEST
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| Great,to recognize love and know how to let go...well done |
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Re: It was never meant to be
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 13th February 2007 @ 10:21:41 PM AEST
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wow this is a very powerfull write!
Simply beautifull even tho a bit sad.
You sound like a very luving, determined, confident person.
Awesome writing!
big huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: It was never meant to be
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by ButchCorpuz on
Tuesday, 13th February 2007 @ 10:27:23 PM AEST
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Nice poem! You know what they say...
"When love isn't meant to be, all we have is between 'hello' and 'goodbye'."
Keep writing!
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Re: It was never meant to be
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 13th February 2007 @ 10:56:15 PM AEST
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wow .. what an exceptional attitude to have towards
a love lost!! It is refreshing to bear witness to someone
embracing the positive ..
I especially loved this ..
"Our paths crossed for a reason, and I’ll be forever grateful for our season"
absolute beauty!!
~Breezy |
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Re: It was never meant to be
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by MickeyPigKnuckles on
Wednesday, 14th February 2007 @ 12:48:22 AM AEST
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Oceandreamer, You have somehow made a breakup extremely beautiful through your words choices to create this awesome composure. Thank you for giving us all such a wonderful poem to savor. Thank you for giving us all a little of yourself as I now say I sure hope you keep your pens ink flowing across sheets of paper as we your readers eagerly await your next poetic caper. Wonderful job.
Mickey Pig Knuckles
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Re: It was never meant to be
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by priss on
Friday, 16th February 2007 @ 08:56:08 PM AEST
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| i love it. the last three lines are absolutely beautiful. i must have stumbled onto this poem for a reason. i am trying to let someone go and your words have really inspired me. thanks for a wonderful poem. |
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Re: It was never meant to be
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 20th February 2007 @ 08:32:50 AM AEST
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| This was a beautiful poem. Great Job! |
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