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-* Another Tear *-
Contributed by
Saloni
on
Tuesday, 13th February 2007 @ 05:48:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I wish i could tell you how i feel
I wish what happen wasn't real
I wish i was still with you
I wish i knew what to do
If only you could see
How much i need you
If only you could feel
How much i miss you
Your gone...
My life is incomplete
My heart even skips a beat
My eyes are so heavy I cannot see
My lost love that means everything to me
Please come back
My only wish that it could be...
Copyright ©
Saloni
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2007-02-13 17:48:30]
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Re: -* Another Tear *-
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by Oceandreamer on
Tuesday, 13th February 2007 @ 06:24:00 PM AEST
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| Very sad write.Your words filled with emotion.I can sense your longing and pain.Set that person free,for if that person is meant for you they will come back to you.What is meant to be will be.Time will tell.Just let it be...for now.Take care. |
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Re: -* Another Tear *-
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by needledancing on
Tuesday, 13th February 2007 @ 08:43:46 PM AEST
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| Hurts to lose love...but one door closes and another opens for a reason. Good to write about your feelings though. Nicely done. |
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Re: -* Another Tear *-
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Friday, 23rd March 2007 @ 06:47:24 PM AEST
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My sweet angel friend Saloni~
Hun please stop doing that to yourself. I know it hurts to lose him sweetie, but you are a beautiful, sweet young lady who has her whole life in front of her. You deserve the best Saloni so please don't beat yourself up about him. If things are meant to be, you will find that your paths will cross again.
I wish you all the very best because you deserve the best of everything my dear friend, yes, even love hun. Dry your tears sweetheart may your days ahead be much brighter.
much love, hugs n prayers,
sue m |
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