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-* FoR ThE OnE I LoVe *-
Contributed by
Saloni
on
Tuesday, 13th February 2007 @ 05:10:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
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You are my angel
that fly's so high
you are the sun
that lightens the sky
you are my life
the one I hold
you are my warmth
when I am cold
you are my shelter
from the rain
you are my hero
who takes away the pain
you are the one
I love so much
you are the one
I love to touch
you are the one
who will always care
you are the one
who will always be there
you are the light
that brightens my day
you are my path
that shows me the way
you will never leave my heart
no matter what you do
your the one, the only one
and i'm always goin to love you
Copyright ©
Saloni
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2007-02-13 17:10:46]
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Re: -* FoR ThE OnE I LoVe *-
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by luxury on
Tuesday, 13th February 2007 @ 05:21:50 PM AEST
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| I like your choice of words its brings the poem to life. i like it |
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Re: -* FoR ThE OnE I LoVe *-
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by Chrissylee on
Tuesday, 13th February 2007 @ 05:56:06 PM AEST
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| the greatest thing in life is love and to write about it in poetry is for the better of loving each other... great write |
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Re: -* FoR ThE OnE I LoVe *-
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by Oceandreamer on
Tuesday, 13th February 2007 @ 06:14:43 PM AEST
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| Awesome poem.Your words are filled with emotion. |
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Re: -* FoR ThE OnE I LoVe *-
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by ButchCorpuz on
Tuesday, 13th February 2007 @ 10:29:06 PM AEST
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Nice poem! The work of a person truly in love.
Good work!
Butch Corpuz |
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Re: -* FoR ThE OnE I LoVe *-
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by hoist1atca on
Tuesday, 13th February 2007 @ 11:40:24 PM AEST
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Seems as if love in life was strong-
Likewise love in the afterlif will be just as great...
Nicely written and very powerful love poem-
Joe |
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Re: -* FoR ThE OnE I LoVe *-
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Friday, 23rd March 2007 @ 06:41:10 PM AEST
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Sweet angel friend Saloni~
This write of yours fills my heart with sadness my dear friend. I'm so sorry I haven't been around for a while. I just wished there was something I could do to take away your hurt and pain. I know you miss him hun, my heart goes out to you. I would give up anything just to see you smile again my dear friend. Sue *hugs* Saloni *tight*
Hang tuff my dear friend, if it is meant to be all will work out for you two. I'm praying for you hun. May sadness and pain never find a way to your beautiful loving heart.
much love, hugs n prayers,
sue m |
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Re: -* FoR ThE OnE I LoVe *-
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by veenu on
Sunday, 14th October 2007 @ 10:58:35 PM AEST
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simple words yet powerfull ,,,,,,............
great write indeed |
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