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Forging Feelings

Contributed by unleashed on Tuesday, 13th February 2007 @ 03:10:30 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



the first time i met you
it really was true
when i smiled and laughed
and i thought i knew
that you and me
would last and last
but now i know
it was all in the past
but i still lie
to everyone
you wouldnt think i've changed
since this all begun

but i have forged
this smile on my face
and laugh you hear
is all too fake
i wish you could hear
my heart cry out
but i'm way too brave
ill mute my shouts

i was way too brave
till the dam in my heart
cracked and split
and fell apart

these words leaked out
theyre all i own
at least until
this poem's done

then what do i have?
naught but a brain
and a empty heart
that's filled with pain




Copyright © unleashed ... [ 2007-02-13 15:10:30]
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Re: Forging Feelings (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Tuesday, 13th February 2007 @ 04:21:51 PM AEST
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this sounds like a tune actually and the wording is well penned out.. great job

vampyress Jenni


Re: Forging Feelings (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Tuesday, 13th February 2007 @ 09:15:31 PM AEST
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Great Title, and good penned, thoughts. Hope it works for ya.


Brew~


Re: Forging Feelings (User Rating: 1 )
by ButchCorpuz on Tuesday, 13th February 2007 @ 10:31:07 PM AEST
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Nice write! Can't wait to hear it with tunes.

Keep writing!

Butch Corpuz


Re: Forging Feelings (User Rating: 1 )
by Keilantra on Sunday, 25th February 2007 @ 01:24:37 PM AEST
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Love the second stanza. I think your need some punctuation,
I like it, though.

xXx

Kei




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