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Tears
Contributed by
wordpoet
on
Sunday, 23rd February 2003 @ 11:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Gently falling tears that leave a glistened sheen,
Wet passions disappointments in agony convene.
Quite often shed in anger, as well as fear and pain,
They tend fall like flowers dew or the trickles left by rain.
Each droplet of our soul is birthed from deep inside,
When drowning in emotions well, through tears we stem the tide,
A tear tells it’s own story, a thought that’s crossed our mind,
And leaves us grasping for the light, and things we’ve left behind.
So if you see me with a tear, slow falling down my cheek,
I hope you don’t consider me, a fool both soft and weak,
For in my eyes you see the pain that losing you instills,
The tears that fall, sweet memories, as love it softly spills.
By: Doug Morton
http://wordpoet.tripod.com
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Re: Tears
(User Rating: 1 ) by karoody on
Monday, 24th February 2003 @ 12:31:45 AM AEST (User
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I like this, Doug. Your imagery is great. |
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Re: Tears
(User Rating: 1 ) by DreamWeaver on
Monday, 24th February 2003 @ 03:13:36 AM AEST (User
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Beautifully written .. always with such a soft romantic flow regardless of the topic. Lovely write Doug. |
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Re: Tears
(User Rating: 1 ) by bobotheclown on
Thursday, 27th February 2003 @ 11:28:51 PM AEST (User
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beautiful makes me wonder why i only started reading your poems a while ago. Keep on writing u wield your pen with power |
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Re: Tears
(User Rating: 1 ) by Lia on
Friday, 28th February 2003 @ 12:42:35 AM AEST (User
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aww Doug..lemme hug you...I think my poem..and yours fit neatly beside each other...I am glad to be a part of the inspiration... :) This is wonderfully written |
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Re: Tears
(User Rating: 1 ) by The_Phantom on
Friday, 21st March 2003 @ 12:09:58 AM AEST (User
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a VERY STRONG PIECE HERE, VERY STRONG INDEED.
THE PHANTOM |
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Re: Tears
(User Rating: 1 ) by candysears on
Saturday, 19th November 2005 @ 05:47:46 PM AEST (User
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You are the perfect poet...You were your name well...God Bless |
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