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Just pain for me thanks

Contributed by Shattered_soul on Tuesday, 13th February 2007 @ 01:19:16 AM in AEST
Topic: obsession

She asked me what can I get for you
And slowly I looked up
My eyes bleeding their crimson blue tears
And she asked me what was wrong?
I shook my head
Not explaining my fears
When she took my hand slowly
And I pulled away quickly
Unable to show her my fleshy tears
She looked down at my wrists
at once she saw my fears
and her eyes filled up with tears
when I asked her what was wrong
her response was a hug
this girl whom I loved
she was my drug.
She then asked me why
Why ruin my life
My response was only
Because it hurts inside.
This pain deep inside
Pulling at my mind
Then I believe
I’ll end it this time.
I pain on my wrists
My metallic brush dipping deeper
Pulling the red
From my veins rivers.
Slowly I paint
My pain away
Then I look up
“Just pain for me thanks.”

Copyright Â© Shattered_soul ... [ 2007-02-13 01:19:16]
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Re: Just pain for me thanks (User Rating: 1 )
by darkangeleyes57 on Tuesday, 3rd April 2007 @ 03:55:01 AM AEST
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This was so sad yet beautifully written. You did a great job expressing your thoughts, feelings and emotions. This almost brought tears to my eyes because I can relate to that. Good poem.

Take care
Christina

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