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False Repose
Contributed by
iodinelove
on
Tuesday, 13th February 2007 @ 12:29:36 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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For all of my love
What have I become?
An old scar
Occasionally flaming
Up
A sour memory
Broken by the
Suffering
Of long years
A false
Repose
In the heat
Of new tears
Unable to
Face
The truth
Or have I become
As a flower
In the shadow
Of your heart
Fallen kneeled
In the hopeless
Dew
Of your desire
Left at yield
In the absence
Of your dreams
Copyright ©
iodinelove
... [
2007-02-13 00:29:36]
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Re: False Repose
(User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on
Tuesday, 13th February 2007 @ 12:38:00 AM AEST
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this is very sad.
good job on this |
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Re: False Repose
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by UrMyInspiration on
Wednesday, 14th February 2007 @ 02:08:24 PM AEST
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| You can actually feel the sadness in every word. Very excellent poetry... |
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