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An Open Window
Contributed by
SageofHalo123330
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Tuesday, 13th February 2007 @ 12:11:12 AM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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An open window
One last chance
I see the tunnel
Is there a light?
A dark tunnel
Lead by a belief
The light of love
Guiding me forward
Positive jin
Moving forward
Negative jin
Moving backward
All important
None working
Neutral jin
Listening, waiting
The key to the lock
Listening, waiting
Watching, believing
That last open window
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2007-02-13 00:11:12]
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Re: An Open Window
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by myheartsvoice on
Tuesday, 13th February 2007 @ 01:34:35 AM AEST
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Nice feel to this write, tense yet hopeful. don't rush it, if it's meant to be it will.
Thank you kindly for the comment also.
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Re: An Open Window
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by feralpen on
Tuesday, 13th February 2007 @ 07:28:54 AM AEST
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| I too, felt a sense of urgency with this write. There is anxiety, fear, hope and resolve all within the confines of your relatively shot poem. It's a very good testiment to your talent to be able to ellicit all this in your offering. |
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Re: An Open Window
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by PhantomVampyress on
Tuesday, 13th February 2007 @ 11:36:39 AM AEST
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a very creative write this piece is.. don't wait too long give yourself a time limit and talk to this person about your feelings.. but if they are taken just forget it..
Great job in creativity here
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