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feel like im dying
Contributed by
behind0this0mask
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Tuesday, 13th February 2007 @ 12:01:13 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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I feel like im dying
i feel like im already there
the pain that i feel
this isnt fair
long days and sleepless nights
crying in the sheets
why must i feel this
this isnt right
why should i wait
when im already there
give me a sign
(just show me that you care)
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2007-02-13 00:01:13]
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Re: feel like im dying
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by iodinelove on
Tuesday, 13th February 2007 @ 12:39:29 AM AEST
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it is right
how else would you know you ever loved? |
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Re: feel like im dying
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by PhantomVampyress on
Tuesday, 13th February 2007 @ 10:34:05 AM AEST
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very sad and powerful expressive piece.. something things just dont work out for the better.. hang in there.. keep the hope
vampyress Jenni |
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